For the past couple weeks Room 1 has been working on persuasive writing. Here is my writing:
In my opinion children should of course wear school uniform and this is why I think so. Read on to know why it’s best to wear school uniform.
Firstly, children should wear school uniform to school especially on field trips to zoos,public pools, and other big crowded places. If you don’t wear school uniform and go missing it would be harder to get back.
Secondly, its polite and respectful wearing school uniform and other people will think that your clean and wealthy. Also that you go to a good school. Imagine what some kids could wear ! Like the seniors if you don’t understand then let me put it this way. They might wear short crop tops, short skirts, stuff like that. They are revealing.
And lastly, what if a poor family joins our school any school! They might not be able to afford clothes or their clothes are dirty because they don’t have much clothes. They can just buy school uniform and that’s done for them.
In conclusion this is why I think it’s best to wear your school uniform!